i think what shoguns clown meant to say was your tunes are pretty random both in terms of samples and arrangement, its not that doing something different isnt a good point about your tunes, but i would focus less on being different and more on just being good.
i like the sounds youve got going in this tune, pretty good clarity at least when listening on these earbuds of mine.
I agree with Logikz. The sound is there alright, there's just a lack of coherence in the tune, iow it's quite random. If you could try to bring some more suspense in the tune, I think it would open a lot more possibilities to make it better.
Point taken people. Thank you for commenting, and sorry shogun clown, thought you were taking the piss.
I have a couple of things going which i cant wait to get up on my web page, definitely different and not as random as my recent stuff.
Away to amsterdam tomorrow til thursday to blow my brains on skuff powder!!