Breakage Feat Detour City - Treading water Bootleg

[orb555]

Bootleg of an amazing tune by Breakage that i've always wanted to do. Have a listen and like the track if you're feeling it... Please feel free to leave any criticism or thoughts you have it is all appreciated.
cheers,

https://soundcloud.com/oliver-burton-4%2Fbreakage-treading-water-feat-detour-city-0b-bootleg

 

[Monogone]

Man, change the snare, it sounds like it doesn't fit.
More sub kick.
Intro really good, but i think it could be a little shorter.
Cheers!

 

[Altered Terrane]

Its a pretty nice tune dude, but it almost seems like you only EQ-ed the low ends and left no love for the mid and highs.
layer some more percussion maybe and then add some EQ's, find the nicest high and mid frequencies and boost them a bit? could do some good
just my opinion of course

 

[orb555]

Man, change the snare, it sounds like it doesn't fit.
More sub kick.
Intro really good, but i think it could be a little shorter.
Cheers!

Appreciate the feedback, will maybe have to look at editing the drums a bit.
cheers

 

[orb555]

Its a pretty nice tune dude, but it almost seems like you only EQ-ed the low ends and left no love for the mid and highs.
layer some more percussion maybe and then add some EQ's, find the nicest high and mid frequencies and boost them a bit? could do some good
just my opinion of course

Cheers for that, will work on what i do with the mids and highs in future