Brainzz & subtronic: Borneo

[Brainzz]

Hi

I'm trying to make a drum & bass track.
I'm fairly new to music production so some feedback would be very nice!
Just want to find out if i'm going in the right direction with this...

Thx!

https://soundcloud.com/meanmonstersociety%2Fborneo-clip

 

[Verva]

The fundamentals are there for dnb, variation and such, you just need to tighten up that low end with the kick its a bit thuddy not quite sitting right, im on headphones and this is my opinion after all, but maybe take some of the low end out of the kick, like cut a but so that the real low sub at 40-50 isnt fighting for space with the kick, i tend to have kicks go down to 60 they can trail lower depends on the style, just gotta play it by ear, could be the sub instead.... after what youve done so far you should go into something different, easy me saying, but a great example for reference is rene lavice & current value - calm the fuck down, the variation in the 2nd half and throughout the track is pretty much perfect