normally not a fan of neurohop but this sounds really sick! the only thing I would do is maybe add a little bit more spice to the drum pattern, maybe after 16 bars add some more kick hits and move them around a bit to maybe get a funkier groove instead of this static one, is just my opinion maybe you were going for exactly that
edit: also If I am allowed to ask, how did you get that metallic sound to your snare in your track "metallic lake" on your soundcloud? I haven't figured that out yet