I feel like everything you said was a really valid point. I actually share your opinion on sidechain compression, I've been trying it out as a technique in mixing, not wanting to use it as an effect, but this track probably sounded a lot better without it.
Also, Manic is how a lot of my tracks come out, Its kind of just my creative process to rapidly move from one idea to the next, and maybe that doesn't always make for an enjoyable piece of music.
My tracks have always been kind of... masturbatory, I guess one could say, because I'm making it for myself first of all, but it is becoming important to me that other people enjoy it too... so thats why I'm here, trying to improve. I want to be able to craft a track to fit the criteria of a specific genre while also having a unique sound.
This turned into a semi coherent rambling response, but my point was that, your feedback was pretty valuable to me. I imagine this track, probably wouldn't be many listeners' cup of tea, plus I have specific things in my mix and creative process to think about changing.
If I don't ever get anyone else to weigh in, then its just me, and I get desensitized to stuff when I've listened to the whole track over and over again tons of times.
Thank you for your input, I do appreciate it.