Bit of differnt vibe for me. any feedback?

[DjCartel]

So i wanted to make an older sounding tune with a bit more grit and natural drums. heres the result. i think the mix is a tad muddy atm, any comments on that would be good. Its stll early days, but thats the main idea of. cheers in advance

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fmikeg123%2Fjungle-tip

 

[mr meh]

sounding real good so far, got that older metalheadz sound to it

 

[underspawn]

Wicked!! i think it only needs a proper mixdown, a good mastering and it'll be fire! Your best tune imo

 

[Menosance]

It sounds very good indeed cartel. I would clean up a little in the low end but overall great track.