The drums sounds very weak and cheesy. There is no real bass in your track too. I take it you are new to this? My first suggestion would be to get better drums samples, and read the sub-bass how to post in the other part of the forum.
Also, if you want more feedback, at least here, it is generally considered a good idea to leave feedback yourself. If nothing else listen to someones song and just tell them if you liked it or not.
I am not that new
On my speakers and phones it sounds good to me. I will have a listen to it in a couple of days then. I can sorta agree with the Bass being weak.
Drum rhythm will stay the same. Might make them heavier (kick and snare Come from june millers pack).