BFM- New First tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Hightech, May 8, 2008.

  1. Hightech

    Hightech Member

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    http://www.sendspace.com/file/lbzf4j


    hay
    This is like th first ok/full tune we have made
    i jst rly would like some feedback i no its nothing special but
    any feedback good or bad would b lovd .

    o

    and enojoy it coz i do.:lol:
     
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    fucking top wrk on the feedbak guys thanx !!!!
     
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    i will give it a listen in 2mins, your comment above is good incentive to review it. lol:rowley:

    also if you let us know a bit more about the track i.e style of drum n bass/jungle then you will more than likely draw a few heads towards listenin to your shit.
    the more you review the more you will be reviewed.
     
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  4. JAGZ

    JAGZ Well-Known Member

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    Drumz sound nice
    like the flutey style chords
    cymbals are a bit too much maybe take the release on them away a lil bit
    that riff you got (sounds slightly like a fart:) is too loud imo
    lovin the guitary synth and the bass goes with the tune.
    it breaks up enuff to keep it intresting.
    a few effects and mayb some samples next time round???
    good work for your first tune m8.
    What program are you useing btw??
    respect
     
  5. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    i'm not even going to bother giving you feedback, come in here with smart ass comments like that, how about you go and give every other mofo feedback ???
     
  6. Hightech

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    k fair enough brah
    ill do my best to do that.


    and thanx mrwobalz :)
    FL studio 7 or 8 all the way.
     
  7. dar kist

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    listening now bro, nice drums man, really good atmosphere, this is a wicked listen man, for a first finished tune its pretty dam good, personally i like the cymbals the way they sound but thats IMO, kicks nice and heavy, snare is ok could be a lil bit punchier, sub bass sound good, but the man bass sound could do with a lil more tweaking imo, but yea bro pretty wicked,

    yea man if you hand out feedback when you can, people will notice and you will start getting more,

    Peace bro
     
  8. MuttleyDubs

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    listenin to this now man, definitely good for a first tune man, nice melody, good drums (could be a bit louder, more crisp), the fart noise is quite jokes..
    i just started too mate, using FL7/8 , check my space
    safe
     
  9. JAGZ

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    no probs bro
    Fruity loops :rslayer: that brings back memories
    respect
     
  10. Bay

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    yeh man, good sounds, like the the melody. transaction between sections are good, drums are sick! let me knwo if you have any more tunes! farty pants noise is sweet! safe -
    if you got the time, check out some of my tunes....
     
  11. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    hmm -drums sound a bit to shuffled- kinda muddy
    would try to werk on definition a bit-the main arp is a bit loud and
    in a whole kinda distorted
    sounds like good ideas though
    and for a first tune - shibby
    keep at it
     
  12. Hightech

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    Cheers guy thanx,

    awsome so no that ppl even enjoy it a lil
     
  13. Hightech

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