Beware The Bleeps Jump Up

[MattDMA]

again yet more updated audio i WILL keep trying to get this tune right coz i quite like it... dont really produce jump up so thought id try n get it right please please please feedback as its allready been massive help

http://soundcloud.com/matt182_acertainsomeone/beware-the-bleeps-update-4-clip

 

[MattDMA]

bump

 

[MattDMA]

lame, was looking forward to some more feedback with this tune

 

[Phat_Sam]

like the drum beat. its a little weak though

definately need to wack a distortion on the bass!

 

[muzzadj]

needs waaaaaaaaay more bass mate! Drop was just the same as the intro pretty much, not enough impact

 

[MattDMA]

im struggling to find a mid ground between the two... when i had the extra sub under it to beef up the bass it was too much and just sounded god fucking awful..and then when i try and lower the sub its not enough... argh ... i'll post up the next update in a sec

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http://soundcloud.com/matt182_acertainsomeone/beware-the-bleeps-update-5-clip updated link

 

[EvezDroppin]

drop was a nice suprise in terms of being different to general jump up. id say dnt repeat the sorta piano melody and fx so much after the drop... maybe change that instrument so its a grimier synth rather than sounding like a keyboard you know?!
a chnage up in the bass melody on the first drop could give it more energy i think, play around with the notes see what u get, the same note repeated a few times doesnt grab me if you know what i mean, durms sound good, nice n clear could have a bit more weight to them but not essential