Between life and death

[n0exit]

hey guys,

after a lot attempts & time, I finally put together a track
The concept: there is life and death; Within a minute your daily life can change from a good to a disaster.
Feedback appreciated. Thank you for your time!

https://soundcloud.com/harleycharm%2Fbetween-life-and-death-1

 

[maschinistom]

hello there and welcome to this forum! nice tracks for started, I like the synth you created, and intro sound quite interesting.
something is off key though, please check at '0:26 esp. very nice drop, very solid drum work, love it! also well done on adding variations.
the gnarl bass coming in at 1:57 doesn't match the track, or should be further edited in my opinion. other than that -- this is good work!

 

[n0exit]

Hey machinistom,

thank you so much for your feedback and time! I'll check it. Yeah, you are right..the second bass was a very fast choice and not rlly thought over. It was more like: I need to finish the track now and don't want to think more about it.
I'll work further on the track.