Beginner asking for feedback on track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Altudio, May 23, 2015.

  1. Altudio

    Altudio New Member

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    Hello,
    I've been producing using FL Studio for 3 years now and i'd like to get feedback on my work.
    I know it's really messy, but if you can take 6 min to listen to a track, i would really appreciate any kind of criticism in order to improve myself.

    Here's the track:
    Keep in mind that i consider every of my tracks imperfect, i just produce them because i like doing it.

    Thanks a lot.
    Apologies for approximate english.
     
  2. smoothassilk

    smoothassilk Active Member

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    This goes in the 'new talent and track reviews section'.
    Sounds decent though, good chords, well constructed maybe the sound design is a bit weak, needs a bit more processing and FX.
     
  3. Altudio

    Altudio New Member

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    I felt that it wasn't the right place to post this, sorry for that.
    Still, thanks for the feedback. I try to design most of my sounds, si i guess i need to improve my sound design indeed. It probably gonna take some time before i manage to get interesting stuff out of a waveform though.
     
  4. purav

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    Agree with that it needs more processing, the synths sound a bit raw, but the drums sound good :)
     
  5. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    I think you should strip back all your synths and bass. A big warm reece should sound nice with this track. Here is a link to a video that you watch and apply to your track.
     
  6. Vanden

    Vanden -nieuwenhuysen

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    Drums sound decent in this!