Beenie Man & Redman remix..... feedback?

[Nick S]

http://web.onetel.net.uk/~nick_stott/LoveMeNowRemix.mp3

Any feedback/constructive criticism greatly appreciated

 

[jay walker]

Tight production on dis 1 - I aint a fan of bootlegs, but this sets its self in a different league
from the dodgy vocal-timing coupled with either a classic jungle break or over-used amen break-style of the 50 cents, jay z and Noreaga boots that have got out over the last few months.

Like the way this builds from a hazy hip-hop lick to a dark tearer.
maybe a hectic switch-up/staggered swagger for 8 bars or so in the last half of the track
would add a lil more depth? (not that it lack depth!!)

You got any other tunes to check out?

 

[Nick S]

Nice one Jay exactly the kind of feedback i'm lookin for. Still got some changes to do, I dont feel some of the fills fit with the breaks properly, and the track does kinda just cut out at the end. Thanks for listenin man

Some other tracks (not sure if the links are workin ATM)
http://www.iinet.net.au/~heinrich/Giungla.mp3
http://www.iinet.net.au/~heinrich/Kriptik2000.mp3
http://www.iinet.net.au/~heinrich/Tszyu.mp3

 

[jdx]

Like the way this builds from a hazy hip-hop lick to a dark tearer.

so do i!
tight production, just tidy up the ending and you're there.

 

[sdm]

[me]downloads[/me]

 

[DBS[2079-e]]

cool choon!
not much more to say , maybe pump up the bass deparment a bit i dunno
but it just sound cool!

 

[Nick S]

thank you guys!! really do appreciate you takin the time to listen, big up

 

[CoB]

np..
I'll even listen to it again

YAY!!
OOH OOH AAH AAH AIIYY!!!

 

[Nick S]

where you from in Australia mate? I'm an ex-perth city local!

You like Congo Natty too Im assumin by your location?

 

[CoB]

in Brisbane
was wondering why u had stuff on iinet servers, hehe
and i jus havent changed that "souljah of Nattiness" thing.. dunno how, and have never heard of congo natty
hehe

 

[Nick S]

Nice whats the scene like in Brisbane mate?