been working on a track

Discussion in 'Production' started by rysk, May 25, 2012.

  1. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    my first, still a lot to do but this is what ive got so far...feedback appreciated

     
  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Hate to tell you this little buddy but you are suppost to put your track in the New talent and track Reviews section.
    Did you make the bass sound your self?
     
  3. Elzerk

    Elzerk 00111100 00110011

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    My balls are crowded
     
  4. spyre

    spyre sample all the things

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    Thanks for letting us know.
     
  5. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    aah sorry, havn't really posted in production before. If a mod can move it, that's cool.

    and the bass is a a preset i tweaked about with and put some other distortion over the top of that, only really making this track to get to grips with the software, but i think there's something here.
     
  6. ApeCat

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    Separate the snare from that amen and get them EQ'd and processed individually - and chuck in a brand new kick to boot. Pay more attention to how and where you chop up your break, sounds a bit dodgy. Try listening to tunes and noting down their structure on paper, try to keep track of how many bars it takes for this and that element to appear / disappear while thinking about your intro.