BDS AKA Mass - The First (Hip-Hop WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by BDS, Dec 29, 2009.

  1. BDS

    BDS Active Member

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    BDS AKA Mass - The First (A Work in progress) A Hip-Hop Beat Ive Started, Boom Bap type of thing...

    Any feedback muchly apreciated :)

    http://soundcloud.com/mass-2/the-first
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  2. subprime

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    It's an unspectacular slow-beat. Kicks too cold, quantizing's too clinical, ambience is way in the back.
    Maybe I just can't hear it in my mind with vocal on top, but I thought it was ok but nothing special.
     
  3. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Yeah if I'm being honest it gets boring and extremely repetative real quick. Kick has no weight behind it, snare is too shallow etc etc. I can just about make out a wind kind of sound in the background, but it's sooooo far back it's hardly recogniseable!