The bass is mostly nice, (too much reverb already mentioned) but I'm not sure about the rhythm. Just straight crotchets aren't a great feel, give it a bit more syncopation.
Lead needs to come through more at 2.21.
Solo drums at end aren't amazing. you can cut those.
I'm not sure you should change the bass sound halfway through: I like the clean bass a little better than than the one with FX. I guess you'll have to try and make variation in different ways?
I like the fills, they're cool.
btw, I think you, me and menosance all started producing at the same time: I'm also working on my fourth track.
It's kinda good to hear people progressing and developing their own sound.