Battletek - Moondust Memory (Liquid/Dancefloor DNB) Feedback?!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by BattleteK, Apr 29, 2016.

  1. BattleteK

    BattleteK Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2013
    Messages:
    220
    Likes Received:
    61
    Location:
    The Netherlands
    Hi guys,

    Made another tune with an old camo&krooked vibe to it, what do you think of it? > listen here
     
    maschinistom likes this.
  2. maschinistom

    maschinistom Active Member

    Joined:
    Jan 31, 2016
    Messages:
    530
    Likes Received:
    106
    hello battletek, nice track, i love the summer vibe of it. the drums are really really nice, punchy and clear, just as they should be. i like the evolving sound of the vocal hook a lot, too. contrary to that, the 1-2 1-2 rhythm of bass and synth is not my personal taste, i think the first real change is after 2:10 min, should be earlier imo. i would suggest to add variation to this, add notes or cut some out and change patterns each 8 or 16 bars. would add more swing and groove to the track and make it more interesting, but again this is my personal taste. good track of yours! :2thumbs:
     
    Last edited: Apr 30, 2016
  3. BattleteK

    BattleteK Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2013
    Messages:
    220
    Likes Received:
    61
    Location:
    The Netherlands
    Hey man, thanks! Great to hear it's technically pretty okay! Thanks for your input
     
  4. d-low

    d-low I know you got soul

    Joined:
    Jun 1, 2011
    Messages:
    1,814
    Likes Received:
    169
    I think theres a lot of good techniques in here, i have to speak objectively as this is pretty much the opposite of my dnb taste, but it seems like the main synth is too loud and over-riding the track and maybe the sub should go louder instead, you could switch up the sub bass somehow by using more interesting sub-sounds between the gaps in the stabs maybe? I dont know but the drums and that little sort of bird noise synth behind the snare (if that makes any sense) are really awesome
     
  5. BattleteK

    BattleteK Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2013
    Messages:
    220
    Likes Received:
    61
    Location:
    The Netherlands
    Thanks you!! I will reference it an look into it! :}
     
  6. Rounder RG

    Rounder RG Active Member

    Joined:
    Dec 14, 2015
    Messages:
    128
    Likes Received:
    53
    Everything is nice and crisp as always, synth work is sounding good. Sounds a little bit more cluttered than some of your previous productions. I like it from about 3 minutes onwards when everything feels like it has a little space to breathe. Nice work!
     
  7. BattleteK

    BattleteK Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2013
    Messages:
    220
    Likes Received:
    61
    Location:
    The Netherlands
    Thanks mate!! really nice to hear :)