DnB Battletek - Fragment [Liquid/dancefloor]

Like ur synths work in this one Jordy!
Intro and drop need better flow imo .. otherwise sounding pretty good to me this one ! :2thumbs:
 
Thanks Tom, what do u mean exactly by flow? I might add a piano or small guitar riff below the bass to add to the flow if that is what u mean :)
I meant transition of intro to drop. More elements might be good but I like your variations in this track already ... don't add too much imo ;)
 
Hey Tom, I changed the transition up quite a bit.. can you tell me what u think of it now? :}

Much better than before imo!! :2thumbs:
A good old riser would fit the drop as well I think.

I just realised there's something odd about the chords. Can u look at chord #3 and 4 and change some of their notes? Not the whole chords, just a variation of 3/4 do that all 4 are well balanced and progressing. Know I mean?

Other than that very track of yours !! :)
 
Much better than before imo!! :2thumbs:
A good old riser would fit the drop as well I think.

I just realised there's something odd about the chords. Can u look at chord #3 and 4 and change some of their notes? Not the whole chords, just a variation of 3/4 do that all 4 are well balanced and progressing. Know I mean?

Other than that very track of yours !! :)

changed it, you like this progression better?
 
Its kinda a let down that the drop is kinda powerless after such an energetic build up. Maybe do a energetic part first and then break down to some more powerless parts. Really like the tune tho. Not really sure about the bassline. Sounds off for some reason (lowest note of the bass)
 
Its kinda a let down that the drop is kinda powerless after such an energetic build up. Maybe do a energetic part first and then break down to some more powerless parts. Really like the tune tho. Not really sure about the bassline. Sounds off for some reason (lowest note of the bass)
Thanks for the feedback Querijn! I can see what u mean and took it into account and placed a link in the original post. I removed almost the whole kickbuild and moved/deleted some intro elements so it should fit better now (took maduk - like this/approaching me as a sort of example for the intro since it uses the same sort of bass). Hmm, as far as I can tell to the note is not out of key? can you specify at what time in the track?

Thanks again!
 
Thanks for the feedback Querijn! I can see what u mean and took it into account and placed a link in the original post. I removed almost the whole kickbuild and moved/deleted some intro elements so it should fit better now (took maduk - like this/approaching me as a sort of example for the intro since it uses the same sort of bass). Hmm, as far as I can tell to the note is not out of key? can you specify at what time in the track?

Thanks again!
Sounds way better now! Meant thr bass at 0:58. Does sound off to me. Or I just dont like the sound :teeth:
 
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