Bansal - Ocean Keys - Liquid Dn'B

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by bansal321, Oct 31, 2011.

  1. bansal321

    bansal321 Member

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    My latest installment



    as always I would like your views on it
     
  2. Fishy:)

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    wish there were more intro than this, its so sudden. anyways real nice chords and vocal;P Ur mixdown seems better than usual and, i can hear ur progressing;P
    good tune but would like to hear some more twist and elements, gets abit simple and repetitive
     
  3. nusphere

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    Sounds awesome to me, love the chords, well love it all really :)
     
  4. bansal321

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    cheers for the comments, fishy ive tried taking out some parts of the song so its not as repetitive? and nusphere i appreciate u checking out the song!
     
  5. bansal321

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    i agree with both fishy and nushphere, its a great track but could be even better with more parts to the arrangement.
     
  7. quentinhiatus

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    dude this is sick keep it up :)
     
  8. W3st

    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    I know this is a liquid track, but why not try adding some pitch automations to your breaks? maybe subtle ones to transition in and out of your sections. jsut a thought. very chilled vibes by the way, i like it
     
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    nice and chilled tack man i especially like the vocal samples you've used :)
     
  10. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Very nice, laid back vibe. Vocals work well, and everything seems to sit nicely in the mix. I agree with what others have said, it does get a little repetative, maybe a few subtle drum rolls / fills would help it roll along better.
     
  11. bansal321

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    Thanks again, w3st i dont quite understand what pitch automations are? can anyone explain that to me please?