Ayala - Break A Little

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Really neat and intricate track.. you seem to be nailing this house stuff - good job is all I can say. Perhaps give the vocals a little bit more presence, try and include some more, I dunno... I wouldn't really change much of it. As mentioned above 2:05 is lovely
 

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Really neat and intricate track.. you seem to be nailing this house stuff - good job is all I can say. Perhaps give the vocals a little bit more presence, try and include some more, I dunno... I wouldn't really change much of it. As mentioned above 2:05 is lovely
thanks mate for your kind words!

yes i'm looking to bring the vocals out more as the track progesses, definately needs it.

thanks again
 

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#9
It's Shit.
I hate it.

































Love the the stabs all nice in light in the beginning. Gives a nostalgia feeling. Your really good with taking subtle noises and interchanging them. Loved that about your last track too. When the track opens up a bit it is all around a good feeling. The end is weird but not bad. Good work.
 

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Love the the stabs all nice in light in the beginning. Gives a nostalgia feeling. Your really good with taking subtle noises and interchanging them. Loved that about your last track too. When the track opens up a bit it is all around a good feeling. The end is weird but not bad. Good work.
aha cheers mate. didn't actually see that.

i think i'm gonna go back to the end tomorrow with fresh ear. did you mean the actuall end or the last section?
 

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aha cheers mate. didn't actually see that.

i think i'm gonna go back to the end tomorrow with fresh ear. did you mean the actuall end or the last section?
Kind of. I did not mean it was bad either. The whole song is bitter sweet and ends with a sad evil electric piano kind of sound.
 
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