Ayala - Break A Little

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  1. elmaruk

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    just thought i'd show you my latest sounds.

    hope you like!
     
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  2. duckstep

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    Nice relaxed liquid feel on the tune, gj! What sample packs did you use for drums? Keep it up!
     
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    thanks mate. it's a sample pack i bought years ago and forgot about, a loopmasters one for techy hits & stuff.
     
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    Love it when it hits 2:05
     
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    thank you buddy, have another listen. got things sounding tighter
     
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    Really neat and intricate track.. you seem to be nailing this house stuff - good job is all I can say. Perhaps give the vocals a little bit more presence, try and include some more, I dunno... I wouldn't really change much of it. As mentioned above 2:05 is lovely
     
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    thanks mate for your kind words!

    yes i'm looking to bring the vocals out more as the track progesses, definately needs it.

    thanks again
     
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    finished guys. i hope you enjoy listening to it as much as i did making it!
     
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    It's Shit.
    I hate it.

































    Love the the stabs all nice in light in the beginning. Gives a nostalgia feeling. Your really good with taking subtle noises and interchanging them. Loved that about your last track too. When the track opens up a bit it is all around a good feeling. The end is weird but not bad. Good work.
     
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    aha cheers mate. didn't actually see that.

    i think i'm gonna go back to the end tomorrow with fresh ear. did you mean the actuall end or the last section?
     
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    Kind of. I did not mean it was bad either. The whole song is bitter sweet and ends with a sad evil electric piano kind of sound.
     
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    ah right ok, well cheers bud. i'll listen it over tomorrow
     
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    Really nice nice tune mate, lovely the part about 2 minutes it, really nice:D
     
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    haha everyones saying that. cheers mate. appreciate it