Awfulmodel -DnB + electric things!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by awfulmodel, May 9, 2011.

  1. awfulmodel

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    Hi everyone,

    I recently started doing some solo stuff and have relied a lot on this forum. I've got a few tracks up on soundcloud and would like some feedback from people who actually listen to this genre....(my friends are mainly all punk rockers and I rarely get any critique past "hey dude this is good"...from them) So, it's not really all that helpful.

    So if anyone has time or is interested:

    http://soundcloud.com/user6056414/wreck (DnB)

    http://soundcloud.com/user6056414/still-not (DnB)

    http://soundcloud.com/user6056414/twentyfourpointone (DnB)

    http://soundcloud.com/user6056414/shittyblock (electro)


    Any constructive/destructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!
     
  2. awfulmodel

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    Anyone? Brutality ok! Shameless bump...............
     
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    lots of kool ideas there, mixdown on the first one needs allot of work, 2nd one is a bit better, and 3rd one better again, keep working on the mixdowns, you've got good ideas there, kool sounds, just need to polish up the production, i only had a quick listen to each of them, but you are heading in the right direction, keep at it!
     
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    Wreck : the starting synth sounds kind of like a bad fl studio preset... the drums are good. after the drop, the new high pitched synth seems annoying. the drum programming is cool though.

    Shittyblock: this is better, a lot more catchy and interesting to listen to.
     
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    Thx for checking them out! Agreed with the mixdown, its something I've been having a shit time with because of real bassy headphones and really shitty speakers so hard to find a good balance between the 2. plus of course I'm still learning. Ty again :)