DnB Autumn Break - feedback wanted

[whiterob81]

Hi All,

Here's a new one I've been working on. Put up a version of this last week but made some changes to it. Would like to know what people think

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Frobthetrustysteed%2Fautumn-break-1

 

[Pyrococcus]

Nice (autumn) mood..
I'd prefer a more electronic drum kit in this context.
And the bass seems to be distorted unintentionally in spots.

 

[whiterob81]

Hey man, thanks for the feedback.

I've done up a new version of the tune which has that bass problem sorted I think. Anyways let me know what ye think

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Frobthetrustysteed%2Fautumn-break-3

 

[Pyrococcus]

Yeah, the bass may be better now.
For the drum kit, I'd glimpse at Commix - Be true..
www.youtube.com/watch?v=oE8zvPKEmO0 (who doesn't know it..)

Your track and this one have something in common.

 

[whiterob81]

Thanks man, that's a very flattering comparison. Love that tune. I think I'm gonna leave the drums as they are but I'll definitely take what you're saying on board for the next tune I'm doing