Attempt number 5. Liquid dnb

[dj mirry]

Feed back appreciated on my latest attempt on producing a decent track

How far off am i guys?

cheers

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdj-miracle-2%2Fsweety-pie

 

[Misti]

This is really cool man, really like the bass and the overall sound design is really nice. Maybe try tighten up the snare a tad and the bass is possibly a bit too loud, overshadowing the kick - but I am litening through fairly mediocre headphones so I could be wrong. Could definitely do with some sort of pad/arp over the drop to fill out the sound but sounding promising so far man!

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fmisti-6%2Fmisti-dreamcatcher

 

[dj mirry]

This is really cool man, really like the bass and the overall sound design is really nice. Maybe try tighten up the snare a tad and the bass is possibly a bit too loud, overshadowing the kick - but I am litening through fairly mediocre headphones so I could be wrong. Could definitely do with some sort of pad/arp over the drop to fill out the sound but sounding promising so far man!

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fmisti-6%2Fmisti-dreamcatcher

Yeah your right, I kind of regret posting this to be honest.

You know them ones when you create a new beat and it sounds awesome that day then you hear it the next day and its sounds shit hahaha

I need to stop rushing my work, i am to eager to get good at this