Atrio - Steet Light

[Atrio]

finally finished it, been busy latly and ive been makin a more darker and hard hitting song as well, so really couldnt be arsed to finish it off but here it is and the opening of a new song. need opinions on the new opening

https://soundcloud.com/atrio%2Fstreetlight

https://soundcloud.com/atrio%2Fatrio-bo-star-work-in-progress

 

[Balthazaar]

Not bad but some of your synths overpowers you snare drum in the mix,try cutting frequencies to add more space for drums,you can always side chain not just volume but also some frequencies,and i would suggest lowering volume on some of your synths it will sound much better if you fix you final mixdown..

 

[nusphere]

Structurally this is a little strange the way things start and stop. I'm really not a fan of the synths in this they sound kinda like a cheap Casio (sorry I don't mean to be rude my friend). Also as Balthazaar says you need some side chaining particularly on the bass, also why does the bass pan to the right at the end of some phrases?