Atrio - Cloud Watcher (clip)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Atrio, Dec 1, 2011.

  1. Atrio

    Atrio Member

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    well its been 2 months since ive started teaching myself everything there is to know. what do you think? all comments and crit are welcome, ill take all your bads and all your goods :p



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    one thing , should my highs be higher ? i always tend to lower them i think
     
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  2. Cyclopyze

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    nice little groove u got there, love the little melody in the background, maybe ''expand'' the synth as the track goes on but other then that, sounds solid, ;)
     
  3. lostnthesound

    lostnthesound Burns Easily in the Sun

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    Soulful stuff here. That heavy compression works nicely and the overall groove is nice. My only critique is that it's very repetitive. Maybe add some fills - either drums, bass, fx drops/ rises, etc. Also, this track could benefit from an additional synth/bass sequence. Perhaps consider writing one using the complimentary key.

    Cheers.
     
  4. Nick1727

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    Dude very nice. That definitely has the possibility of becoming a really solid track and I agree with Lostnthesound, its kind of repetitive, but some FX and fills would easily fix it. Its a great start :D
     
  5. Atrio

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    cheers the comments, taken it off for now but look above for the old track that ive done some more work on :)
     
  6. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    im only listening on laptop speakers but the snare doesnt sound great.. will check on monitors tho? synths sound really nice tho!
     
  7. Balthazaar

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    Not bad mate but,when listened this on higher volume that swep in intro way to hard on ears try cutting cuting some higher freq or reduce volume a bit,and that beat it seems two breaks layered together like there is problem with latency,or you added some delay/reverb can*t tell for sure,fix that and you got pretty solid tune...