Atrio - Cloud Watcher (clip)

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well its been 2 months since ive started teaching myself everything there is to know. what do you think? all comments and crit are welcome, ill take all your bads and all your goods :p

https://soundcloud.com/http%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fatrio%2Fdont-let-me-go

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one thing , should my highs be higher ? i always tend to lower them i think
 
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nice little groove u got there, love the little melody in the background, maybe ''expand'' the synth as the track goes on but other then that, sounds solid, ;)
 

lostnthesound

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Soulful stuff here. That heavy compression works nicely and the overall groove is nice. My only critique is that it's very repetitive. Maybe add some fills - either drums, bass, fx drops/ rises, etc. Also, this track could benefit from an additional synth/bass sequence. Perhaps consider writing one using the complimentary key.

Cheers.
 

Nick1727

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Dude very nice. That definitely has the possibility of becoming a really solid track and I agree with Lostnthesound, its kind of repetitive, but some FX and fills would easily fix it. Its a great start :D
 

Balthazaar

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Not bad mate but,when listened this on higher volume that swep in intro way to hard on ears try cutting cuting some higher freq or reduce volume a bit,and that beat it seems two breaks layered together like there is problem with latency,or you added some delay/reverb can*t tell for sure,fix that and you got pretty solid tune...
 
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