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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Barnzee, Feb 16, 2008.

  1. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    New tune hellhound is up, louder sounding than my other tunes and with all the criticsim you guys have given me taken onboard. Please check it out and provide an honest opinion or some feedback, thanks :)

    The tunes are visible now for those who had issues ;)

    www.myspace.com/drumandbarnzee

    wait for the drop:)
     
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  2. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    tight cunts...:twitch:
     
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    Lost me after the breakdown mate but im not it all that wailing synth buisness so probably not the best to coment, loving the intro though, i like the bee like stabs and the synth growls.
     
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    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    cheers buddy, nice one :)
     
  5. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    HELLO MATE. Some wicked samples in there mate and a cool theme to boot. The main section of the tune needs a little more energy but still a big improvement on the last tunes mate.
    Maybe start your tunes with a thinner layer of sounds, so that your drop sounds more effective and heavy.
    Keep going mate.
    peace
     
  6. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    :rslayer:cheers man, still working on optimising my sound :) All your advice is very useful
     
  7. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    like the intro too and would agree the synth im not much on
    drums could use some beef to emm , i like the bass stabs though man soundin tough
    keep werkin on your sound though man your the best judge of wot your tunes should soun like
    respect
     
  8. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    cheers mate, advice taken on board:) loving tones for bones... your big production wise:rslayer:
     
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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    gracias amigo
     
  10. M. Progression

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    Definitely need some variation with that drum line, it's the same thing over and over. Maybe throw another snare or something metallic over that snare you got going on. Might want to look at putting a break in the middle of that beat to give you some seperation. Also try slowing it down a little bit while you are writing it and then speed it up when you get towards finishing it up. What's the bpm on that? I think there's a vibe in that though, you gotta grab hold of that vibe. What kind of equipment are you using? - Hope this sparks some thought - Werd up
     
  11. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    cheers man, the bpm is 180bpm, as with all my tracks. Ive made a few tunes since then, i kinda tend to make one, then use the criticism gathered as a starting point on the next one. Check out the thread on 'No mercy' for my latest work.Peace:)
     
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    Respekt, keep the tracks coming, let me know when you got something fresh out the oven. SUB7