Asking for feedback on track

[C. West]

Hey!

I'd be very proud and happy if some of you guys had a look at one of my recent drum and bass track. It's been posted on Soundcloud since a couple of months back and now I wanted to share it with you!

I wish you a fine day!

https://soundcloud.com/westfelt%2Fswimming-like-a-dolphin

 

[maschinistom]

hi C.West. nice easy flowing tune. sound quality is fine. I would edit drums to get some more roll, though. see this track as example: https://soundcloud.com/mentormoore%2Ftomorrow

 

[C. West]

Thanks so much for the reply! I'll look into it!

 

[C. West]

https://soundcloud.com/westfelt%2Fzone-without-time
here's another one of my tracks! An oldie but a goodie? Hope you guys like it!

 

[Phonik]

Hey man, track is sounding cool. I'd like to hear some kind of build up in the stab chords, some filtering would be ideal! Work on getting the subs to really punch through also by layering different sounds and really beefing up the 100 - 300 Hz region. One more thing I'd suggest is to have some kind of break sample layered into your drums - just make sure everything is properly tuned, i.e. if the tune is in A minor, then the drums should also be hitting notes like A, E, G etc. You can find this out through most spectrum analysers! Once you've done that stick a camel crusher on top with the tiniest amount of distortion and you'll be jammin

https://soundcloud.com/phonikdnb%2F03-gangster

 

[IV4]

Nice chords and melodic elements. Your hats run out of sync with themselves. So does your snare at times. How did you make your drums. Where is your bass?
Eq tips: Try high passing sounds and even low passing sounds to create as much space in the mix as possible. Also, don't be afraid negatively eq frequencies out or down to make room for other frequencies like a snare or a kick.