im wondering what kind of DAW and which samples you are using.
the sound is really raw. it need more space. you could create that with more hall, reverb or just more elements.
of course you need some nice monitors to balance your sound.
these are just technical aspects. you need to learn them. then you can focus on your ideas.
hmm hard to explain.
maybe this is a question to all
it sounds a lil bit "flat". you could stereo your sounds. percussion or not the "most important" elements in left and right position. then there should be place in the middle for the kick, snare and bass. add some effects.
the quality of the samples is in my opinion very underrated. so choose carefully. which kick? which snare?
try some EQing, compression etc.