ArticalDon - Cybernetic Organism [New Track] [Jump Up]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ArticalDon, Sep 3, 2011.

  1. ArticalDon

    ArticalDon ArticalDon

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    Ezee, Only just finished this tune a few hours ago, Please take a listen and let me know what you think!
    Comments please, Thanks.



    Only bin producin since start of april, Still got lots to learn!

    If you like it then check out the rest of my tune, Links are in my sig.
    Thanks, Respect!

    d-_-b
     
  2. Innovine

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    I liked the intro and drop, but the bassline is a bit too dubsteppy for me. It's like getting nails hammered into your head, every second of the track. Great, if that's what you are going for, but some space to breathe would be welcome in my opinion. For example, at the end of a 16 or 32 bar phrase, you could turn off the LFO war-war-wakka-wakka thing, and play a long note with a big slow (3 or 4 bars..) pitch slide or something, if you know what I mean. Something to break up the LFO rhythms. That'd be a great spot to throw in a drum fill too.

    Pretty cool that you are putting together tunes after a few months. I had a listen to a few of your other tunes. Same comments, more or less. There's no real breakdowns in any of them. Perhaps thats what you are after, I dunno. Wish I could churn out tracks at that rate anyway.
     
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