Any thoughts on my new track?

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Thank you for listening. This is the second draft, so the arrangement should be better and the mixdown needs a lot of work. Any thoughts? Thank you.

https://soundcloud.com/michael-goetz-975677037%2Fvanburenhoes

 

[Manu Forti]

Loads of cool ideas but a bit too many changes in bassline/feel.

The snare sounds wet and a weird mixdown or i dunno... eq more of your sounds...

Pad is cool as fuck

 

[maschinistom]

hi PD. nice track, much like the chilly vibe of the intro and the proper beat after that.
I think the kick and bass could be more glued together to create a pushing rhythm.
try to increase the side-chaining effect and EQ both parts to fully match ...
maybe adding another bass layer (mid range) could also enhance the rhythmic effect?
agree, the pads are cool, very airy and well matching the track. good work, like it!

 

[Lino Casu]

snare is too wet in my opinion ... and pad is used too few for its coolness ... nice idea ... keep working on