Any potential good here? Please advise fellow junglists. Thanks Kindly.

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Always hate to throw bits up on the forum right after i puke them out of my brain rather than waiting a few days for my ears to reload and binning or editing but i am doing it now because i have a busy week coming up and may forget about this piece of crap here. lmk what y'all think if you have any thoughts on it, i always take any comments and put 'em to good use.

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[Kolendo]

You've got some interesting ideas happening, but your percussion needs more meat to it, it sounds like a top loop right now.
Also idk if your sub bass is either super low frequency or just not loud enough, but either way it doesn't sound right in the mix.
Loving your pads though, top notch work!

 

[WhoSayReload?]

Always hate to throw bits up on the forum right after i puke them out of my brain rather than waiting a few days for my ears to reload and binning or editing but i am doing it now because i have a busy week coming up and may forget about this piece of crap here. lmk what y'all think if you have any thoughts on it, i always take any comments and put 'em to good use.

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I think there's too many ideas going on, try simplifying it, sticking to one loop and then adding and taking away elements from it.
Also I think the structure needs a bit of work so try throwing some of your favourite pro tracks into your daw and study how they flow from start to finish.

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Yes, agreed with all that is put forth above, thank you and I will look at these issues on the remix (if there is one,) but also on future production. These attempts at dnb sometimes get way too out of my control, such as here.



arrangement is something i really need to focus on. Also, how to achieve bass tones that are not too muddy but clear and somewhat crispy, i feel a lot of my stuff lacks the weight i would like to convey. any tips thank you.