Any Minds on a Tune from me ?

[Skylark]

Hello Everybody, so yeah, i've done a track, some stuff like State of Mind Mindslicer, I'm producer since about 7 month or someting like this.
I'm working one Ableton live 8.22, so yeah tell me what's good, what's wrong, anything to say is good !

Thanks you all !

Tune : https://soundcloud.com/skylark-6/skylark-cyber-tune-original

 

[AlienWeapon]

Try posting this in New talent and track reviews :thumbup:

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[Deluded]

Hello Everybody, so yeah, i've done a track, some stuff like State of Mind Mindslicer, I'm producer since about 7 month or someting like this.
I'm working one Ableton live 8.22, so yeah tell me what's good, what's wrong, anything to say is good !

Thanks you all !

Tune : https://soundcloud.com/skylark-6/skylark-cyber-tune-original

Drum are pritty cool... think the lead noise could have some subtle reverb and eq to make them sit with the drums abit better. Could also use an automated filter on ur drums to add more intrest