Any feedback appreciated!

[IndustrialDream]

So this is my second attempt at working a jump up tune I finished the first one of and I am happy with it, any critism welcomed feedback feeds progression!

Heres a link to the tune

http://www.sendspace.com/file/b4ta6y

I am pretty happy with it at the moment but I might add an outro in the future just to increase the length a bit.

 

[IndustrialDream]

Bump

 

[Neomind]

why ghost in the shell like the series?
lulz, needs better mixdown... the drums are too thin and low in the mix, and the bass is VERY high.
More hi hats needed, layer a break to this!!!

 

[IndustrialDream]

Thanks man appreciate you replying, haha yeah I like the series

Heres a copy with your advice taken on-board hopefully it sounds better!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2bfzqj