any comments on my first proper tune??

[CushT]

heres a link, been workin on this all week. quite like how its turned out, but id be interested to hear wat peeps think.

any input would be appreciated,

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=410251&T=616

cheers

 

[logikz]

for a first tune this isnt bad at all. i mean yeah it does sound novice but then againyou should hear my first tunes. theyre fucking horrendous. i should mention i wrote them in straight ascii in a qbasic editor though. i like the blarpy bits and the sort of idm ish melodies.