DnB Any chance of a little feedback?

[MC Burberry]

Hi all, Ive been on DOA for a while and have been producing for about year and a half. I recently switch from Reason to Ableton. Any chance of some feedback on this monstrosity? Much appreciated!

 

[ifanmusic]

Hi all, Ive been on DOA for a while and have been producing for about year and a half. I recently switch from Reason to Ableton. Any chance of some feedback on this monstrosity? Much appreciated!

Your ideas are great the mix is just not big enough sounding. I can't work out what it is missing though

 

[MC Burberry]

Thanks man yeah mixing isn't my strong point

 

[ifanmusic]

Youll get there. Drums could do with some saturation, sub isn't quite strong enough but its not a bad little tune

 

[MC Burberry]

thanks again dude, ill stick at it!

 

[Egypt Stefan]

I couldn't listen past the first few seconds i'm sorry.

So I made a picture of you in a Burberry cap, smoking a rocky zoot with a packet of non-toxic Crayola crayons.

 

[Centrepoint]

Your ideas are great the mix is just not big enough sounding. I can't work out what it is missing though

Wicked ideas man, agree with ifan on the mix...maybe a little more panning with some of the drums, bit of eq'ing on the kick and maybe the same with the bass to give it a bit more depth? Nice tune mate.

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

This is cool because it isnt perfect but you seem like you have something a bit unique going on in terms of where u seem to be trying to take this. Not sure it works for me but im fine with the burst of creativity so respect to you for sharing and lets hear more of your work

 

[MC Burberry]

Many thanks for the replies. I can sometimes be heard on Dogs on Acid as ED209 but will post back here sometime!

 

[MC Burberry]

Hi all, ive made another tune, just wondered what people thought of this? How does the bass sit? Any replies greatly appreciated!

 

[ifanmusic]

Hi all, ive made another tune, just wondered what people thought of this? How does the bass sit? Any replies greatly appreciated!

Drums should start earlier I think - would make the transition from intro to drop flow better. The bass and vocals are nice. It needs a few more layers I think like sfx, stabs etc

 

[MC Burberry]

Thanks dude. ill consider putting the drum earlier and will definatley try and fill it out with some fx. Thanks a lot for listening!

 

[Deleted member 23164]

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fucking brilliant that

 

[Manu Forti]

who changed the fuckin thread title

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fucking brilliant that

Ok so we should probably feedback the time though


*tune

 

[Deleted member 23164]

this monstrosity?

basically answered your own question.

first off.. i know nothing about production.. my opinions is from a 'fan'.. nothing technical incoming.. .

its not .. shit.. we've had ALOT worse.. its actually quite good but very amatuer.

but its far from something that would be released on a label doe.. but i think that would come with time? maybe start anew.. and then start anew and then again and again and again..

we've had some proper weird japanese manga schoolgirl crying shit once before.. that was different...



remember opinions are like assholes...

 

[Leniz]

remember opinions are like assholes...

But they can help you

 

[Deleted member 23164]

But they can help you

mmmm i bet your supple bumhole could help alot of us xxx

 

[Leniz]

mmmm i bet your supple bumhole could help alot of us xxx

No believe me. It doesnt

 

[Deleted member 23164]