Any advice on my attempt on minimal/jump up

[Current_uk]

https://soundcloud.com/current_uk%2Fflight797

 

[ASRA3]

The idea is quite nice, in my opinion, what could make it a better track is creating contrast. For example, when it first drops after the intro, the volume percepction of the track donsen't change, you could have tried to lower the volume of the intro/increase the volume of the drop. Appart from that, you could have increased a little bit the volume of the snare or added another snare layer on the top of it, because in my opinion, it sounds a bit under the rest of the elements. Finally some sidechain to the melody following its rythm could have added some dynamism to the track.