Another work in progress, more rolling this time

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DjCartel, Jul 21, 2013.

  1. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    Menosance aka OSOI

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    not much to critize but I would bring up the 'ha' that is sometimes is heard. (it is a sort of stab not sure though). Although I have listened only that much I would also vary a bit the mid bass reese sounds but that is just an opinion rather than a critque. Keep on working on it :)
     
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    This is nice mate the things i`d suggest would be overlay a slightly louder snare on the 2 and 4 of the bar to accentuate those more and so that those hits are louder than the little snare/rimshot hits that are going on throughout.. The bass work is really nice but i think it needs juiced-up a touch / compressed as some of this little fade-off filterwobbles are too quiet.. My 2cents!
     
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    Sick work mate, I recognise that "Ha" sound from somewhere lol, I like it! Drums are crystal clear
     
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    Superb feel and the mix is perfect.
     
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    The sub is lacking on my end. The drums sound very nice. Good synth work, however i think the synth sounds could sit together better.
     
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    cheers for the feedback so far, the ha noise is cut from a break from a free pack, everyones bound to have it its a great pack for free. will keep working on this one as people seem to dig it so far. nice ones guys
     
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    What is the name of the pack?
     
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    Sweet! I think I have that pack, I'm gonna search for that break, cheers!
     
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    FrustrateUK Mad Scientist

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    Hey Cartel, could you tell me wich break it was? I can't seem to find it haha, cheers mate!