another wee dnb ting i been working on

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    nz dnb

    second dnb tune i've tried to make
    critisicm and feed back is invited and needed.
    chur
     
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    I think it sounds nice but is far too long and lacking in percussion and the hats are far too quiet, especially when they're playing on their own.
     
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    thanks, i've got no real idea what i'm doing, so your feedback is much appreciated.
    hah yeah 10min is way too long, i struggle to get the "structure" i want in a song whilst still having it not be wayy too long
     
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