i checked it first time you posted but couldnt think of anything inspiring to say
i think you need you add some more of your own spice to it ( maybe add more of your own sounds)
i find that your layers overlap too much , you cant hear the full sound so feel like you want to skip back and listen to it again but you realise its overlaped by another sound
the delays and echos are SWEET man , really loving the slow dubby feel
you should incorporate a lead maybe? somthing that makes you want to carry on listening
ill have another listen tomorrow and keep you updated , i do like giving advice and picking out what i like and what i dont within the dnbforum track reviews
peace anyway!
