another new one on soundcloud

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by luapclark, Oct 6, 2009.

  1. luapclark

    luapclark New Member

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    http://soundcloud.com/luapclark/brass-3

    I know its a very unimaginative title but meh. (i'd welcome any suggestions to rename it).

    Not too sure if the brass sound is too cheesy?

    Any comments on the mixdown?
     
  2. rob_del_terror

    rob_del_terror - ̿ ̿'̵͇̿̿з=(•̪●)=ε

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    feelin the drums, they're cool, the brass is a bit cheesy, distort it a bit, and if it was me, i'd use an lfo to give the longer notes a bit of a wobble.

    not bad overall tho, nice idea, just need to loose that acoustic sound from the brass i reckon. and beef up the bass because its just not there.
     
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    msmith222 redbeard

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    i think brass does have a touch of cheese, but the drums sound nice, and the bass is pretty good. maybe just a bit of variety in the melodies? overall, sounds good as an idea.
     
  4. luapclark

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    Thanks guys, I'll have a look at boosting the subs up a bit. Will have to have a play around with the brass to see if i can give it more edge... will post back when i've made some changes, whenever i get some time to do them...
     
  5. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    i guess i feel a bit impatient waiting until 1.05 for the track to hit more than 2 notes...
    got a bit bored, you need to make it more interesting, throw in whateva u can.

    and then the brass turns the track a bit james bond to my ears.

    definatly got clear ideas i think its just in need of being made more interesting, and as others have sed ur drums sound nice. turn the snare up1!!