Hey man, I really like the chords you have here. Very smooth, really fitting well with the sunshine I have coming through my window. I really like the vibe you have going here, the reverb hits in the beggining, the very delicate drums (they are very clean aswell) and the bass is very warm and just keeps everything glued and chilled.
Overall I am a big fan (I'm into the more minimal type liquid) the only thing I'd say I was a bit on the fence with was the sneaky amens coming in. I think a nice subtle vocal (soulful) with lots of reverb would fit in great with this!
If you could feedback me too that would be appreciated https://dnbforum.com/threads/james-detached-the-siren-tech-project-feedback-needed.193630/
Sounding really nice to me. I was expecting this to be the clip that you sent me on soundcloud a few weeks back but its something completely different. I agree with Symbiosis in that the additional melody in the break down is somethign you could make a bit more of. All nicely arranged and with the subtle variation thats needed to keep it interesting.
Like the overall sound and the chords are beautiful. Are these samples or are you playing them?
I know you can take a bit of constructive critisicm so ...
Personally I find the little stutter in the splashy hat loop starts to be really distracting and i'd probably pad it out with a bit of noise from somewhere else in the sample.
The drums fit the mood of the track really nicely but they are so clean that they are a little bland.
The growly bass stabs are sitting a bit too far back in the mix and i'd eq the mid range a little higher as they don't really stand out from the sub, they also seem quite to be panned quite a lot to the left?
As always i'm a little jealous of how clean your tracks always sound, in this case though I think a bit of background dirt might bring it all together.
Have you ever seen the Nutone masterclass where he talks about background noise, might be useful. Around about 09:30.
Top work overall, keep em coming!