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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Jeffe, Jan 24, 2008.

  1. Jeffe

    Jeffe New Member

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    I know I shouldnt do but after hours of sitting in front of my computer I need to know what other people think about this tune. In fact its my second one so please dont judge too hard :) btw the end is not well done but i dont care ...

    Tune is made with renoise ...

    Thx for any opinion!

    Jeffe

    http://www.megaupload.com/de/?d=HYHVAD7N

    or http://www.myspace.com/dnbjeffe
     
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  2. Toejam

    Toejam OOOBEY DOOBEY

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    Do yourself a myspace page and upload them on there so i can have a listen.

    Im too busy downloading midget porn to download music tracks



    :D
     
  3. Jeffe

    Jeffe New Member

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    Toejam OOOBEY DOOBEY

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    I like the ideas you defo know how to structure a tune but it needs a fair bit of extra production.A bit more atmosphere in there more synths pads and etc....

    like i said i like your ideas and they are definaitely on the right track just give it a bit more whoooooooomph!
     
  5. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    does need more layering to it
    not bad for a 2nd tune though
     
  6. Jeffe

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    sorry Iam still a newbie ... what exactly do you mean with layering?
     
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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    filling in empty sound but not wit just anything
    geta good flow to your tune & focus on it
    add things that compliment it