and another one

[Jeffe]

I know I shouldnt do but after hours of sitting in front of my computer I need to know what other people think about this tune. In fact its my second one so please dont judge too hard btw the end is not well done but i dont care ...

Tune is made with renoise ...

Thx for any opinion!

Jeffe

http://www.megaupload.com/de/?d=HYHVAD7N

or http://www.myspace.com/dnbjeffe

 

[Toejam]

Do yourself a myspace page and upload them on there so i can have a listen.

Im too busy downloading midget porn to download music tracks

 

[Jeffe]

Ok ... done!

http://www.myspace.com/dnbjeffe

still looks crappy ... but the music is playin!

 

[Toejam]

I like the ideas you defo know how to structure a tune but it needs a fair bit of extra production.A bit more atmosphere in there more synths pads and etc....

like i said i like your ideas and they are definaitely on the right track just give it a bit more whoooooooomph!

 

[vickvega]

does need more layering to it
not bad for a 2nd tune though

 

[Jeffe]

sorry Iam still a newbie ... what exactly do you mean with layering?

 

[vickvega]

filling in empty sound but not wit just anything
geta good flow to your tune & focus on it
add things that compliment it