Amnestic - Fatal Error (DnB, need C&C!)

[Amnestic]

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchriscote%2Famnestic-fatal-error

Trying to focus more on a deeper, more subtle bass so that the complexity of the drums can come through. Looking for C&C, mostly regarding mixing and song structure. Thanks for listening!

 

[ND4SPDMW11]

TBH, one of the sounds in the song sounds kind of strange to me IMO. It's kind of distracting from the song. Personally, I would add some hats to the song to fill in some of the empty parts. There are many ways to be complex with hats

You could add some panning to certain elements of the song to make it more diverse.

Also, I can barely hear the bass. You can compress the drums and the bass so that you can hear both elements of the song. Just my suggestions The drum patterns you have right now though are nice, though it makes the song feel slower somehow. Those are my suggestions