Amnestic - Fatal Error (DnB, need C&C!)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Amnestic, Jan 10, 2015.

  1. Amnestic

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    Trying to focus more on a deeper, more subtle bass so that the complexity of the drums can come through. Looking for C&C, mostly regarding mixing and song structure. Thanks for listening!
     
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    TBH, one of the sounds in the song sounds kind of strange to me IMO. It's kind of distracting from the song. Personally, I would add some hats to the song to fill in some of the empty parts. There are many ways to be complex with hats :)

    You could add some panning to certain elements of the song to make it more diverse.

    Also, I can barely hear the bass. You can compress the drums and the bass so that you can hear both elements of the song. Just my suggestions ;) The drum patterns you have right now though are nice, though it makes the song feel slower somehow. Those are my suggestions :)