DnB Amisto - No. 21

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Ostima

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Hi there, I'm a newbie here and I want you guys to hear my outcome!

Although you guys could be disappointed after listening this shit, because I've started producing my music just few months ago, I hope you anyway enjoy while you are listening.

Any feedback will be appreciated. Actually, I came here to hear your feedback :)
 
Welcome dude, your track sounds good to me, not overproduced (I like that)
1) I like the nasty bass but from 1:14 maybe there are some clashing notes?
2) the "cool down" moment at 1:52 went a little too far IMHO
3) it lacks of a real conclusion!

Nice job :)
 
Sentierum said:
Welcome dude, your track sounds good to me, not overproduced (I like that)
1) I like the nasty bass but from 1:14 maybe there are some clashing notes?
2) the "cool down" moment at 1:52 went a little too far IMHO
3) it lacks of a real conclusion!

Nice job :)
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Thanks for your feedback!
Yeah, I also thought the part of the outro was a little (not a little, very very) weak, so I am trying to fix it now. :))
But if you don't mind, could you tell me more specifically about number 1? Which notes were clashed?
 
That don't sound bad after all, but I think you made some "bass chords" instead of single notes and to me it sounds a little strange!
 
hello. I totally like you track, coming very strong, very powerful. :2thumbs:
i'm not sure, on my speakers the mid freq range sounds a bit dull, maybe try some EQing, esp. scoop in 500hz range.
otherwise, cool track :cool:
 
The bass was a single note, but maybe there is something wrong with low-mid range.
I'll check it later with my speaker, not a headphone.
Thank you guys again!
 
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