ALYIANN - 646 [(ORIGINAL) i'll be pleased for any comments]

[Alyiann]

Hi there , new track which i have done after month of work
Rate and comment and give me some feedback

https://soundcloud.com/alyiann%2Falyiann-6-4-6

 

[groelle]

intro is boring, maybe shorten that or bring in some more elements, your break is way too weak for that kjnda song and overall you need to turn up the musical elements more imo.

work on your mixing and your drums id say.

big up.