ALYIANN - 646 [(ORIGINAL) i'll be pleased for any comments]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Alyiann, Mar 29, 2011.

  1. Alyiann

    Alyiann New Member

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    Hi there , new track which i have done after month of work;)
    Rate and comment and give me some feedback :)
     
  2. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    intro is boring, maybe shorten that or bring in some more elements, your break is way too weak for that kjnda song and overall you need to turn up the musical elements more imo.

    work on your mixing and your drums id say.

    big up.