Alix Perez - Hemlines Bootleg [ ADVICE AND CRITICISM NEEDED ] WIP

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Salvus

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Hi Guys,

I haven't been producing all that long.
I used to use Sony Acid, however have finally made the move over to Ableton.

When producing I always make something that Im half happy with , or get bored , or feel that it is lacking in certain areas but just don't know how to fill those gaps.

I have uploaded my latest work in progress to soundcloud so you guys could have a listen and possibly give me some needed feedback?

http://soundcloud.com/b_51/alix-perez-hemlines-bootleg

** Thank you paracyte and richie_stix for your comments:
I have tried to add more interest to the track and have done a second upload below**


https://soundcloud.com/b_51%2Falix-perez-hemlines-bootleg-1

Thanks again guys!
Any feedback received will be appreciated.

Cheers,
Phil
 
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Ez Salvus
Not exactly my cup of tea, but from technical side :
this shakers, (used as a snare) are way to loud,
Bassline need to be louder,
You have to keep your tune interestingm at the moment there is not much going on
keep up the work.
Cheers
 
paracyte said:
Ez Salvus
Not exactly my cup of tea, but from technical side :
this shakers, (used as a snare) are way to loud,
Bassline need to be louder,
You have to keep your tune interestingm at the moment there is not much going on
keep up the work.
Cheers
Click to expand...

this... i think cos its so minimal, you gotta be well subtle with the touches that bring it to life and add interest
 
Thanks for the advice guys. I have updated at the top of the thread.
I am wanting to try and get that 'shogun audio' feel to the track, i'm finding it very hard to get it feeling full and interesting without over cluttering.
 
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