Alien Weapon Neuro dnb track W.I.P

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by AlienWeapon, Dec 15, 2013.

  1. AlienWeapon

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    Please have a listen and give feedback wherever possible. It's just a rough mix atm and I intend to give it a proper outro. I want to fine tune it as best I can. Thanks a lot. http://soundcloud.com/8-bitheroes/alien-weapon-w-i-p

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  2. Mania

    Mania i fukin wot m8

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    Hoooly shit those bass mids are insane. Sounds fucking awesome.
    Youve also done a really good drop with the break, which need a bit of push like you said. The pads work and the effects work, which give the track the character it needs.
    I think the intro could be a bit longer and more proper, another 16 or 32 bars would suffice. Lastly, the lead that comes in at 1:18 sounds a bit boring and straightforward, and could use some movement, space, or just a different melody.

    Track sounds really top atm and has a lot of potential, youve done a great job (y)
     
  3. AlienWeapon

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    Thanks bud. You made some good points, I think il make the intro longer and the lead needs some kinda movement, I'm yet to find the best sound I want for it, its quite bland in contrast to the rest of the track but I do like the melody.

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    It's all cool, but there is a weird glitch in the bass.
     
  5. AlienWeapon

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    Yeah for some reason it didn't show up untill I exported, but thanks for pointing it out.

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    very nice sounds man… not too sure about the mix or the drums… drums almost sound out of tune with the rest of the song… fx and build up all really good bro
     
  7. AlienWeapon

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    Thanks bud, appreciate the honesty:thumbup:

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  8. AlienWeapon

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    Anymore advice while I'm in this part of town?

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