Alexi // NEW TUNE // Twenty Four Seven (WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Alexi, Jul 21, 2010.

  1. Alexi

    Alexi Drench Audio

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    Been a while since I've posted anything I'm working on, so thought I'd up a clip.

    More dancefloor influenced than my usual stuff, not sure about the vocals, bit cheesy maybe.

    As always feedback, critism and advice are all more than welcome.

    http://soundcloud.com/alexi/tweny-four-seven
     
  2. PandaMindset

    PandaMindset Does not eat bamboo.

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    I like it, but you should upload a higher quality one... And why is it so short? Make it longer :) I wanna hear more.
     
  3. Alexi

    Alexi Drench Audio

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    cheers mate,

    unfortunately it isn't any longer, this is the main theme and wanted to run it past people before spending time filling out of the rest of the tune

    Just stuck trying to get anything more exciting for the rest of the tune than repeating the same 16 bars with different instruments and drum fills lol
     
  4. mistercut

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    Very Sub Focus like. Not 100% on the vocal, but it fits in with the tune. Go for it, make it a full tune.
     
  5. Alexi

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    sound mate, I agree about the vocal so the search to find a better sample continues...
     
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    Love the bass line. The song sounds good. Just think the synth patches sound a tad plain, need a bit of spicing up (taste)

    Good wip
     
  7. Alexi

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    nice one mate, yeah the main synth only has a touch of reverb and that's it, tend to do effects and processor near the end of the production stage, so will go mad on the fx inabit

    glad you're feeling it
     
  8. Cat Gas

    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    can't comment on mixdown due to being in headphones
    The kick rush was too fast as in not enough warning there is a kick rush. The vocal clip works extremely well, but I think there needs to be something more, maybe some bass stabs or another kind of bassline or something on top of what you already have there.
    Sounding good, keep it up :D
     
  9. Alexi

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    cheers mate, the kick rush ain't ideal, it's just there to emphasise the drop while I write something more inventive