Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...4vr

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  1. W3st

    W3st Unsigned DnB Producer

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    Easy guys, here's a latest remix Ive made, been working on it all day so I would love if you guys could give me some critique points so i can work on the song tomorrow!




    cheers
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    I love the original.
    The song is cool but the vocals sound to forced tempo. What is the original tempo? Where did you get the Vocal sample?
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    yeah its a good song, i think the fast vocals sound beast, but then again I am definitely biased. 126 is the original :/ and I bought it off itunes
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    126 ehh... Then I have no ideas. Still good remix anyway.
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    Nice. Try and play with your drums. The snare needs a lot more weight. and in general they need to be louder. Not sure about the bass sound itself but I'm really loving the bass line.

    Could be a banger!
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    cheers sam, needed that advise for my mixdown. ill get to that tonight and post an update for yall.... then free dl's as usual

    easy guys
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    updateed version:

    cheers
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    Really fun. I like this remix.
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    Cheers IV, 'preciate the support throughout the thread!
     
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    Re: Alex Clare- Too Close (W3st Jump Up Remix) all criticism and suggestions loved...

    Very cool! Really liked the vocals and the bassline especially. You're good!